long verb ambience?
Pretty nice song, though some notes didnt seem to fit ur song 100% ..
ahwell, nice melody, well fitting drums :D
Pretty well variated too!
Long song and not boring, so good job there ^^
Some tips: put a compressor on the master, ur song will sound more clear.
Also try to find (even) better drumsamples.
Keep up the good work :)
nice one xD
We wish u goodluck with ur album!
Pretty nice beat in this song, relaxing pads too..
nice speeddrums coming in at 0:46 :D
Nice piece of music!
Keep it up :)
Kriz & F-777
Thank you very much! I really apprieciate this review and so far the album is doing alright in my eyes and i shall have much more in 2008 with the launch of a second album. Thanks again and will try to make a reasonable more like it... that is if I can get some inspiration from good tracks like your collabs ;)
intro sounds really good
nice use of drums, variated and fitting the song!
the pad melody is so nice..
beautiful piano coming in there too!
just make sure u dont make it too repeative, ur song.. ah well, its very well built!
very good use of fx'es here!.. so nice..
keep it up!!
Btw, this is Kriz&F-777's collabprofile, mind checking out some of our collabsongs?
Thanks for the constructive criticism! :)
For sure, man, you boys are rocking this place.
I like the drums very much!
The clap isnt that bad as xerox says, maybe just lower the volume of it a litl, thats all.
Very well built song, nice fadings!!
Melodies are well done too.. all fitting very well together!
Just dont use 1 melody too often, use enough variation :)
Goodluck on ur further work, keep it up!
A beauty !!
well fitting, heavy pad comes in there!
first melody is done very well.. really awesome!
and the drums are really well done... !
the use of the short voicesample is very well done here.
keep it up! this will definitely become a very good song when its finished!
Nice melody in the beginning :D
I like it xD
pretty cool drums, but i think it would be better if u'd put them a litl louder.
drums are fitting the song well!
make sure u dont repeat ur melody too much.. put some variation in it or try adding a second melody that suits ur first melody (is really hard, i know)
ah well, u'v done well! keep it up!
nice beat in there!
percussion is pretty well done, well variated, loud enough,.. goodjob!
melody is pretty cool too!
well variated and fitting!
make sure u dont stretch ur song to far without variating it enough..
ah well, keep it up! ur doing well :D
Thank you so much for the great review. I did check out some of your material, and I thought it was great. I'm currently working on keeping my songs 'breathing,' in other words, well variated. Hopefully, whatever new material is to come will be to your liking.
nice 1 !!
Nice melody coming in at the beginning.
kind of abrupt change then into another cool melody!
and again an abrupt change.. its slightly weird but i think it rocks :D
contains many cool melodies!
make sure they all fit together!
drums are done pretty well.
keep it up!
very cool beat!
i like it!
well variated, nice rythm, cool use of hihats,..
keep it up! u can do it!!
I'll try to make the changes smoother on my next song..thanks
Nice, tensed intro!
Cool drums, cool pianomelody!
Everything comes out well together!
The song is pretty well built!
The drums at 1:00 are well done! :D
Nice change at 1:10!
Keep it up dude, u can do it!
Nice bass at the start!
The intro is pretty well done :D
Nice piano melody coming in there! really fitting :D
Ah, i recognize the fruity loops instruments XD
Song is built very well! everything suits eachother properly!
Well done! keep it up dude xD
Thanks for the nice review
and i did see ur material, great stuff
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